【答案】Dear Ms. Smith,

I’m Li Hua, president of the Student Union of the Middle School Attached / Affiliated to Jiangxi Normal University, located just near the university where you are teaching. I am writing to see if we could have the honor to ask you to be the judge in our coming competition.

You see, to promote students’ interest in learning English, we’ve planned to hold an English drama competition, the theme of which is Man and Nature. It will begin at two on the afternoon of July 15th, lasting three hours. There will be ten participants competing with each other in Classroom101, and all the students of our school will be attending it.

We would feel much honored if you could join us and give us some instructions. You can reach me through my phone number 88507033 at your convenience. I’m looking forward to your reply.

With best wishes,

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，邀请附近某大学的外教 Ms. Smith 来作话剧比赛评委。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

要求：

1．介绍自己

2．告知比赛时间、地点、主题、人数

3．邀请他担任评委，告知联系电话

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

Have the honor to do sth; judge; promote; interest; plan to do sth; hold; theme; last; compete with; attend; feel honored; join us; instructions; reach me; at your convenience; looking forward to

第三步：连词成句

1. I am writing to see if we could have the honor to ask you to be the judge in our coming competition.

2. You see, to promote students’ interest in learning English, we’ve planned to hold an English drama competition, the theme of which is Man and Nature.

3. It will begin at two on the afternoon of July 15th, lasting three hours.

4. There will be ten participants competing with each other in Classroom101, and all the students of our school will be attending it.

5. We would feel much honored if you could join us and give us some instructions.

6. You can reach me through my phone number 88507033 at your convenience.

7. I’m looking forward to your reply.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, Not only…but (also)…, Including

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, But, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,on the other hand…, Some…,while others…,As for, So…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改