【题目】假定你是李华,正在负责策划“绿色校园”活动(Green Campus Campaign),请给你的英国笔友Henry写一封邮件,向他介绍此次活动的目的、内容,并征求他的建议。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
Dear Henry,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Henry,
How are you doing? I’m writing to seek your help, because we are to start a Green Campus Campaign to arouse students’ awareness of environmental protection.
We plan to organize this campaign like this. First, a series of lectures will be given, introducing ways to build a low-carbon school life. This will be followed by a discussion about ways of saving water, paper, and electricity at school. But how can we put them into practice and make them our daily routine? I wonder if you could give me some practical advice as I know you’ve organized such activities.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件给你的英国笔友Henry,向他介绍“绿色校园”活动的目的、内容,并征求他的建议。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1. 介绍“绿色校园”活动的目的、内容;
2. 寻求建议。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
seek sb.’s help;arouse awareness of;environmental protection;plan to do sth.;a series of;put …into practice;daily routine
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m writing to seek your help, because we are to start a Green Campus Campaign to arouse students’ awareness of environmental protection.
2. We plan to organize this campaign like this.
3. a series of lectures will be given,
4. But how can we put them into practice and make them our daily routine?
(根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。)
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达:In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明:For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实:In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择:either…or…,or
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改