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假如你是李华,受学生会的委托,围绕“垃圾分类,从我做起”这一主题...[高三][英语]
收录时间:2021-12-11    答题:高三英语(古老师)

【题目】假如你是李华,受学生会的委托,围绕垃圾分类,从我做起这一主题,请你为校报英语专栏写一封倡议书,内容包括分类的意义,现状和你的建议。

注意1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

参考词汇:垃圾分类 garbage sorting

注意:1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

【答案】Dear friends,

Our school produces a lot of rubbish every day, such as leftover food, waste paper and plastic bottles, which brings a wide range of environmental problems as well as the waste of resources. Therefore, it's time we took immediate measures to change the situation.

First of all, it is necessary for us to raise awareness of environmental protection and develop the good habit of garbage sorting. What's more, we should voluntarily differentiate recyclable rubbish from non-recyclables in our daily life.

In a word, if everyone does his/her bit responsibly in garbage sorting, our school will become better and better. It will also contribute to sustainable development. So, take action right now!

The Students' Union

Jun. 12th 2020

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生以学生会的名义写一封主题为“垃圾分类,从我做起”的倡议书。

第一步:审题

体裁:应用文

时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构:分总法

先分要点论述,最后做出总结。

要求:

1.垃圾分类的现状

2.垃圾分类的建议

3.垃圾分类的意义

4.发出倡议

第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)

rubbish, a wide range of, took immediate measures to, raise awareness, develop the good habit of,  differentiate…from…, recyclable, non-recyclables ,in a word, contribute to

第三步:连词成句

1. Our school produces a lot of rubbish every day…

2. …which brings a wide range of environmental problems as well as the waste of resources

3. it's time we took immediate measures to change the situation

4. it is necessary for us to raise awareness of environmental protection and develop the good habit of garbage sorting

5. we should voluntarily differentiate recyclable rubbish from non-recyclables in our daily life

6. In a word, if everyone does his/her bit responsibly in garbage sorting

7. It will also contribute to sustainable development.

根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)

1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not onlybut (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand,On the other hand Some,while others,as for, sothat

4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,

第五步:润色修改