【答案】Dear Peter,

I am writing to convey my gratitude for your kind help and care during my stay in your country, without which I wouldn't have enjoyed it so much.

Guided by you, I had a chance to visit some places of interest in England and experience such unique culture as well as beautiful scenery. Thanks to your generous help, I do believe that I have a better understanding of your country and culture. What's more, during the week, the comfortable room, delicious meals and especially your friendly family made me feel at home.

I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness. I will show you around in China. I am looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】本文是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李明的身份给英国好友Peter写一封感谢信，感谢他在你去英国参加中学生文化交流活动时给予自己的帮助。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文。文章要使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：1.表达感激之情；2.回忆各种收获；3.发出邀请。在写作时，注意书信的格式以及串联过渡用语What's more,；同时尽量使用熟悉的词汇及短语，尤其注意不要出现中国式英语，并在力所能及的范围之内使用复合句或者谚语，增加获得高分的可能性。