【答案】

How to build a beautiful school

1．Be polite to our teachers and classmates.

2．Follow the action rules to keep shool yard clean.

3．Be quiet in the learning building.

4．Take more care of the plants and flowers in the school.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇作文叫小作者介绍怎样让校园更美丽，小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如Be polite to our teachers and classmates. Take more care of the plants and flowers in the school.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。