【答案】

Liu Ping’s Changes

Liu Ping is now different from what she used to be like. She has changed a lot. She used to have time to watch the movie, but now she gets up early every day. In the past, she used to play games with her friends. But now she stays in school all day and no longer has time to play games with her friends. She used to chat with her grandparents in the past. But now she has a lot of homework to do every day. Sometimes she went to a concert with her parents in the past. She misses her old days very much.

【解析】

试题分析：根据表格信息提示，以“Liu Ping’s Changes”为题，完成这篇作文，我们要用简单准确的句子把表格中的内容准确地表达出来。写作中要注意运用一般现在时与一般过去时这两种时态。来描述刘平过去和现在的变化。根据材料内容可知主语是第三人称。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文内容简明、扼要地阐明了表格中列举的刘平过去与现在的不同变化。并包含了文中所要求的全部信息。其中使用的句式和短语都很准确恰当，.如: She used to have time to watch the movie, but now she gets up early every day. She used to chat with her grandparents in the past. But now she has a lot of homework to do every day.学习中再注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。